What can I say, I really really liked the way that you wrote it. You used PERFECT description and analogies and just ah! It's the best thing I've read so far today. My favorite line was, "..dribbling down his chin like an oil slick on a tropical beach serving to remind the world that humans are evil, that humans can and will destroy something naturally stunning whenever possible."
That line just..I dunno, I can't describe what I felt when I read it. Wait, I do know. I felt like you nailed it, right on the head. Good job. :)
Author's response
Thank you very, very much!
I'm really pleased that you think the description/analogies were alright and not boring!
Thank you soooooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review; you've made me smile! :D