(#) ReddyDevil 2012-02-15 08:55:58 PM
Again, there were a few grammatical mistakes that I found, mainly to do with punctuation. Maybe that's just because I'm a punctuation nazi when it comes to read fanfics, I dunno. But still, it didn't affect the chapter too much. If it's something you're really worrie about though, maybe you should get someone to read through the chapter and edit it before you post it. I think I mentioned that in my other review. Anyway, I cant wait to find out what goes on next! :D
Maybe you'd like to do it? I'd appreciate that very much :)
Thanks for reviewing again!
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