Review for Trade Mistakes

Trade Mistakes

(#) Kaleidoscope_Eyes 2012-02-18 10:37:34 AM

I think this a good idea but I'm a little confused. Is her name Jackie or Charlie? It seems as if you changed your mind while writing.
Really though, this is a good start. Please add more. :)

Author's response

yea sorry her name was originally charlotte so i nick named her charlie but then i changed her name to jack and forgot about the nick name. sorry for the confusion.

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