Review for Vampires
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-02-19 06:33:49 AM
It would be great if you spaced things out, used capitalization and re-checked your work before posting... There are just too many errors.
Great try though. I see this was posted awhile ago.
Hopefully you've already improved from this point. And hopefully this doesn't come off as insulting. If so, I apologize.
In which Frank fails at seduction, everyone knows Gerard's masturbation habits, Bob declares war on ...
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Rewritten Gerard daughter story.
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