Review for Losing Me

Losing Me

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-02-20 04:19:47 PM

I really enjoyed this chapter and I didn't think it was boring at all! It really expressed Gerard's and Bert's worry over Mikey. You can really tell Bert cares for Mikey but he just wishes that it wouldn't come in the way of their relationship. It is quite interesting at how much Gerard trusts Bert through all the small arguments they have and is able to forgive him so easily. I think it was a brilliant chapter. Update soon. I can't wait to see how Mikey and Frank are doing!

Author's response

Thank you very much; I'm extremely relieved that you didn't find it boring!
I wanted to do a little catch-up with Gerbert and show their thoughts of what's going on with Mikey, so I'm glad that their worry came across. Bert really does care about Mikey deep down, he just sometimes lets his own thoughts get in the way of that.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)

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