Review for Losing Me
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-02-23 03:44:39 PM
I really wanted to show both Bert's jealously in this chapter and his more compassionate side, I guess I wanted to create some sort of sympathy for him so I hope that came across.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time ti review! :D
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