One thing about your time travel stories, they move quickly. I'm on the edge of my seat wondering how Harry will play Moody.
(Next part is for the previous chapters that I read offline last night)
Given the "extra" events in Harry's life (Dumbledore keeping the social service people away, memory charming Harry after the broken arm) I'm surprised he told Dumbledore anything. I certainly wouldn't.
Good story. Thanks for writing.