GAH! THIS IS BRILLIANT!
This last chapter was frustratingly short - I am utterly desperate to know more!
There is so much that makes me want the next chapter. Your writing style is poetic without being overbearing, a lovely balance that I find rare in any fan fiction. It makes reading this story incredibly engaging and I find myself drawn in to the point that I can get a very tangible idea of the personality of each character. Gerard and Frank have been fleshed out in wonderful detail - each are perfectly palpable and their responses are seamlessly natural within the context. Not to mention I don't think I came across a single grammatical error which is such a breath of fresh air, considering most writers on this website don't know how to string a simple sentence together.
Please, I BEG you to write more! Your writing style is simply addictive!
Author's response
Wow, thanks! And what a coherent, elegantly phrased review :) I'm sorry the chapter's so short - my plans for each chapter are always pretty long and complex, so I end up writing a bit and then adding to it. Sorry if that's frustrating, but I'm so glad you like it! xo