I'm the "Eddi" mentioned twice above. Hiya and hello! =)
My YouTube page (where I review fics; some of them are pretty fecking amazing): http://www.youtube.com/user/edditheficritic?ob=0&feature=results_main
Also, I'd like to recommend you read anything by the amazing ChloesGreenDay: http://ficwad.com/author/117931
or AdnarimSmada (among her millions of random posts, there are actually really well written stories): http://ficwad.com/author/115249
Hell, check me out, too, I guess: http://ficwad.com/author/72518
Welcome to the site, kiddo.