Review for Birthday Surprise!

Birthday Surprise!

(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-03-15

Them-- I have no desire to be with either of them. It would ruin the image in my mind.
There were a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but other than that great job! The smut was good.. Ah Frank, you're such a confuzzled little muffin! I really hope Vibia doesn't kill them!! Nooo! Don't die! Or kill... Someone else.
Well. Awesome. loved it... Yes I most certainly did xD

Author's response

Yeah, know what you mean. Wouldn't mind getting with one of them, but them getting together would be a lot hotter!! XD

I'm an awful proof reader of my own stuff, so I'm not surprised there's some typos in there - sorry though!

Glad you liked it, and lol - Frank's a muffin!

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