I am saying this about the story in general: it's amazing and gripping and grabs hold of my attention all the way through. The plot is well built. Frank and Gerard are adorable. This chapter: I tend not to review smuts cuz I feel like I'm being judged as being some weird perv, but anyways. It was pretty good. Not too graphic... Just the right amount of graphicness(that's not a word...)
Author's response
thank you for such a lovely review! i'm glad you like the story and the plot, I promise there is more to come. and thank you for saying that about the smut, makes me feel loads more confident.