I loved this chapter! It had me feeling sympathetic with both Way brothers; with Mikey because he's going through more than either of the other two know and with Gerard because he's just trying his hardest to look after his little brother. It was interesting how you used Mikey not wanting to have his dressing changed through shame and him jumping at being snapped at, both showed just how shy and broken he is on the inside. It was nice to see him eating again, but the fact that he's only doing it because he's scared of Gerard getting mad at him makes me kinda nervous because if he's only doing it through fear then it won't work long term.
Once again you've left me begging for more and I can't wait to see where you take this story next. Great job! :D
Author's response
You're such a nice reviewer! Thank you. I'm relieve that you liked it. Yes both Way brothers are going through too much to handle right now and it is really affecting them. Gerard is trying really hard and Mikey is just a mess who is afraid of losing Gerard. Im really happy the thing about Finally eating but only for Gerard, and that it came through alright. Gerard is only getting his hopes up. You really pick up each chapter as I have it in my head!
Thank you so so so much for you reviews. They are really helpful!!!