Review for Hold My Hand
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-01 12:10:47 PM
Seriously, I loved it so much!!!!!
I love how Mikey thinks that people want to hurt him, and that he's ugly, and Frank (who I was surprised about being the protector, because you rarely ever see that) was telling him how beautiful he was, and how Frank felt so guilty about everything.
Also, I can't get over how much I love your writing and descriptive words!! :D
I wanted to show how rattled Mikey was after the attack with the whole him being afraid of people thing, so I hope that came across alright. I love writing Frank as a kinda protector for Mikey.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D
“What do you possibly find attractive about me when I’m sick?” His smirk became a grin ...
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