Review for That Boy

That Boy

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-03 04:13:21 PM

This had me crying at the end. It was so brilliant! It seemed to me that through out the story that things were slowly getting better as Frank was willing to stand up for him and then to try and help him in the restroom. Yet, at the end it all came crashing down when it became too much for mikey. I can imagine the guilt Frank had on himself after he saw that notice because he really wanted to stand up for him but was too cowardly. The ending was really good and it was unexpected. I think you made an excellent job out of this sad yet insightful one shot. I really enjoyed it! :)

Author's response

I'm soooo sorry that it made you cry!
Thank you very much. Things were starting to slowly get better, at least from Frank's point of view but there is only so much a person can take before it becomes too much. I'm glad that you thought the ending was alright; I was worried that it was a crap way to end it.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D

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