Holy shit, that was brilliant! You're a natural at poetry...POST MORE?! :D Seriously, I loved this- it really spoke to me and I love the whole concept. Sadly it's all too true. But it made a great poem...into my favourites it goes!
P.S. Thanks for your review on 'Dress of Bones'- I actually replied to it for once 'cause I'm online :L
REALLY?!?!?!?! OH MY GOD I LOVE YOU RIGHT NOW! ah, thank you so much - this review made me fangirl so much!! THE FAVOURITES OF COSMICFUCKINGZOMBIE?!?! MAYBE THERE IS A GOD AFTER ALL!! :DD yeah, thanks for your support! i will probably post more. I'm actually working on another one now!