Review for Dress of Bones
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-04 09:53:12 AM
Your use of italics and the bold function work really well and add effect to the over all impact of the words. I loved the metaphors and imagery, they really drove the point of the poem home.
Fantastic job and if I'm ever able to write half as wonderfully as this I will be an extremely happy person. Great poem! :)
Anyway, I'm rambling; thank you so much, this review really made me smile :D
And excuuuuse me- your poems are FAR better than mine, okay? :L
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