I am so sorry for not reviewing any of the other chapters, but I have been without internet for two days (I WAS DYING), so decided just to review the story as a whole, ya'know?
So, yeah..
This is incredible!
A little different from your usual writing, I must say, as I think you normally focus on the descriptive parts rather than the speaking, but it was a nice change :)
I love how Mikey was like 'I like your dick..', and Frank had to wash his eyes out, and Gee wouldn't believe it and was making up excuses, and through all of it Pete was an wonderful arrogant yet loving prick :)
Amazing, well done :)
Author's response
Don't worry about not reviewing the other chapters, I totally understand! :)
Thank you very much!
This was extremely different to what I'm used to writing, in both the respect that there was more dialogue than normal and in the respect that it was a lot more light-hearted than what I normally write. I was a little unsure about it, so it's really nice to know you thought it was alright!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D