Review for Five Days To Convince Gerard Way.
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-04-15 01:16:24 PM
But I would suggest perhaps getting a Beta reader because this story has so much potential but there are a few issues such as capital letters on names and speech marks that need tending to
But honestly I love it so far and it manages to be funny and adorable and hot all at the same time so keep it up!
Thank you for pointing that out. I have a strange obsession with capital letters at the beginning of words and always have to end up re-writing the words and i useally take it too far making mistakes in words that actually need the capital; if that makes sense o.o
Anyway,I'll go through the text and try to fix them:)
Thank you for commenting; i really appreciate your review and hopefully i'll manage to continue to impress you in future chapters!
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