Review for Auditions!

Auditions!

(#) detonationmouse 2012-04-16

Name: Allie Way 
Age: I'm fifteen, but you can change if needed.  
Nationality: Amurrican. :)
Siblings: Gerard and Mikey (I'm auditioning for the part of their younger sibling) 
Appearance-
Hair: dark red, with Taylor Swift-esque messy curls
Eyes: big, navy blue, lined by eyeliner
Height: 5"3
Skin: relatively clear, pale
Clothes: emerald-green converse with yellow laces, black ripped skinnies, a Misfits tee, green fingerless gloves, a grey beanie,
Facial Features: heart shaped lips, oval face 
Piercings/Tattoos?: Just snakebites.
Personality: I act kinda like Mikey, shy when I want to be, in a good mood I'm bubbly and talkative. Loyal, I mumble a lot, don't show extreme emotions, creative, thoughtful, observant and very gullible, yet I think up good ideas.
Habits: I mumble, bite my lips, and over-apologize.
Likes: the colour yellow, rock/alternative music, sushi (I take after Mikey), skipping school, skateboarding, bats, playing with my pet snake, Maiden. (After Iron Maiden)
Dislikes: fire, homophobes, heat, math class, the ocean, pop music.
Hobbies: Running in track, playing the drums, writing poetry, hanging with my brothers, watching old horror movies, doing crazy stunts with or without my trusty skateboard, eating tons of candy, listening to music, drawing, messing around with the jocks and preps.
Greatest Fear: Burning alive. Either that or drowning.
Sexuality: Bisexual
Drugs, Alcohol or Cigarettes?: I sneak wine in my room or with friends. I'm addicted to cigs.
Back Story(try and be original and fairly detailed): Okay, since I'm auditioning for a character's sister, I'll try and make this up. We (le Way family) moved to Jersey when I was 3, I grew up really close with my brothers, I don't exactly fit in my school (let's just say I usually come home with a bloody nose and toilet water- covered hair. :/ ) I'washed two girlfriends but the second one (her name was Brianna) was very abusive so I ended it. I suffer from extreme anxiety and mild OCD. My family doesn't know I drink, but my brothers know I smoke. Right now, our family isn't very well off, the house is small and we live in a dangerous neighborhood. When I was younger Gerard took me to a comic store where we worked and he got held up. I was pretty traumatized after that. That's about it.
Anything Else:
Hope ya liked my audition, thanks for reading and I hope I get a part as Gerard and Mikey's younger sibling. :3