Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-22

Jon Jon Jon Jon JON! XD Haha, I was waiting for him to come in!!! Now all we need is more Spencer...

And Brendon = biggest asshole ever. Seriously. I wanted to slap the cocky smirk i imagined off his face. And like I said before, he's gonna get clobbered.

And seriously, when Ryan was panicking? Brendon needed to turn around and say to him, "Stop panicking!" XD

AND YES, RANDOM BRITISH EXCHANGE STUDENTS CALLED CHARLIE AND ALEX AND OMAR AND DAN!!! I could totally see it happening.

And with that kissing Ryan thing? Yeah, I have a friend who agrees with you a HELL of a lot...

Waiting for the next update for more Jon.

Author's response

Yep, I was excited to write him in! :D There will definitely be a LOT more Jon in the next chapter. There's not a huge amount of Spencer in this but he does come in later. (I also still have my other Spencer story which I've been editing a lot since I want it to be a decent story but I'm not posting it until I finish 'What Is Love?' so I'm hoping you find that at least somewhat interesting...)

Yes! I seem to love to hate him in a lot of my stories.
Ryan panics a lot in this, haha. i just see him as the mature/yet panicky one for some reason.

Mmm, it's so tempting. :D

Hahaha. I'm glad I'm not alone on that.

I'll try to get it out soon but I've got a few other different updates I'd like to work on tonight, plus I'd like to review 'Phantoms' but since I am lacking a life at the moment... who knows what I could get done?