This is so beautiful and intense. I like how it was all a metaphor. And everything you said about the zoo you imediately paired it with something in the media. And it all made perfect sense and flowed beautifully. And the thing about the cage- genius. You are a genius.
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Thank you! :D Seriously, that's such a compliment...thanks so much for taking the time to review- it means a lot :')