Review for H.E.L.P
H.E.L.P
(#) amos222 2012-05-07 07:08:51 PM
That was good! I'm so glad that you decided to post another song. I liked this because it felt like reading your poetry, but meatier, if you know what I mean. I feel like the lines were longer and there was more description. Your poetry is usually this really interesting juxtaposition of really deep themes and delicate structure, but this felt totally heavy and legit. I can't say which I like better, but the variety is refreshing and I basically adore everything that you write, so there's always that :) Thank you for posting this! I loved it, and I hope that maybe you're feeling a little happier about life and feeling better physically now that you've gotten even a little catharsis through all of your poetry.
Author's response
Thank you so much! Eeee, I'm so glad you liked it- I never feel very confident about my songs, 'cause they aren't really something I do very often, so thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such an absolutely lovely and detailed review, it really means a lot :'D Honestly, your reviews are like gold.
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