Review for Just Sleep.
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-05-09 08:30:10 PM
(excuse me while I stare at this for a moment... I think I'm too moved to leave my usual essay of a review.)
Just... Aw. I get why you put it in the MCR section even bough it doesn't belong here... We'll let it go because it's so fucking awesome. And most of us don't care anyway...
Anywho... Yeah. I really liked it. It was... Hm. I can't really describe it. It was dramatic, it was well written and it made me bite my lip in concern and, well, weird angst for story. (It's not only me who gets angsty over update dates and stories right? Hm... I've dreamed about the ending of an unfinished fic... Have either of you guys done that before? I'm not insane I'm not... Well. This can be argued. We'll carry in from my mindless babble. We probably actually won't move on... Knowing me. Sorry.)
I liked the descriptions; they were good, easy to understand. I didn't have to think too much, but I still had to think to grasp the concept of the story. That's a good thing, because while I'm not the brightest crayon in the box and am shit at deciphering stuff I can't stand it when people downright write in a flat tone with no real voice. Yanno? God knows I probably do it all the time... But I try to not read my own shit. (shrugs. Whatever)
So... Damn. This is short. I feel kinda bad for that, to be honest... Well. KEEP WRITING!!! (I know I'm not one to talk with this short ass review...)
A short ficlet about a Sand Shinobi's all-important 'first time'. Kankuro POV.
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