Review for When Vernon Didn't Miss

When Vernon Didn't Miss

(#) Cho_Fleur_Nymphadora 2012-05-13 06:18:16 AM

The other stories involving the North American Druids are a bit better. This story seems to lack some of the inspiration those other stories have. In some of the comments you seem to have gotten a bit fed up with fanfiction while writing this story and it shows.

Even if you have given the Brotherhood (immortal wizards) a bigger role than the Druids in this story, neither have really been all that important. Especially the third year at Hogwarts has the good guys doing...basically nothing.

That said, I like the concept behind the Brotherhood. I like the intrigue within the Brotherhood. That one faction is (effectively) behind the rise of Voldemort, while the other faction is fighting against Voldemort.

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