Review for can things get any worse? ch 1

can things get any worse? ch 1

(#) forbiddendreams 2012-05-17

You should continue, your story has a good plot so far and the writing is good. Even if it is a little dark it just shows how you felt at the time you wrote it and you shouldnt feel bad about that.

Also i want to know what happens next!

Author's response

okay thank you one response and ill keep writing next section coming today