Review for Story Auditions!!!

Story Auditions!!!

(#) TOLOVEISTODESTROY 2012-05-17

Part : Korse's daughter maybe?

Real name : Megan (prefers megmeg)

Killjoy Name : Peroxide Bride


Looks :
Long cherry red dreadlocks
Big blue eyes.
Pale skin with a yellowy undertone
Tall and skinny.
A few freckles on her nose

Personality : Quiet at first but opens up quite easily. She doesn't smile much and always looks like she's plotting or inventing something in her head. She's determined and always gets what she wants. Highly intelligent.

Clothes: black charlie simpson t-shirt, simple, purple hooded jacket with a black leather waistcoat thing over the top. Stitched on the leather is the symbol of peroxide linked with a ring.black fingerless leather gloves, Black ripped skinny jeans and purple doc martins, always carries a black backpack. She also has snake bites.

Talents : dancing, she always has her pointe shoes with her in her backpack. Is also really good at inventing weapons and the like.

Likes: dancing, music, food, and the heat of the desert.

Dislikes : BL/ind, her father, her twin and has a crazy, irrational phobia of forks so she uses chopsticks instead :)



Backstory :when BL/ind started to take over and her father was employed she started to rebel against him. She was practically placed under house arrest as her attitude excelled. As a punishment her father made her help with creating the rayguns and vehicles but dismissed the thought of her using them to escape and become a killjoy.

Anything else: she has a totally identical twin sister who stayed in battery city. They hate each other with burning passions. Also she fights mainly with martial arts but has two wickedly sharp blades hidden in metal cuffs up her sleeves.

Just realised I don't know if Korse's daughter is a killjoy :s if she isn't then you can change my part to a normal killjoy with the backstory being generally the same but with a family of residents of battery city :)
Hope you like xx