(#) KobraBlaze 2012-05-21 03:51:54 PM
I really really loved the atmosphere shown in this chapter. You can tell each and every one of them cares for each other and they are just like a team. This had the best and most sweetest ending ever. I love how Brendon sees no difference in Mikey being diagnosed with depression. Gerard really seems to see how perfect they are together. And I'm glad he sees it. The last thing Mikey would need is an over-protective brother. I love how you described all the characters through a family, especially Frank. I think Mikey is definitely in the right care with all of them. They're just so... ADORABLE! You've really made a super job on this chapter. And I can't wait to see more! Ryan deserves those death threats. I'm really intrigued as to where this story will go! :)
Thank you very much; I'm glad that the atmosphere came through alright and that you got a sense of their care for one another. They really are like a team, especially when it comes to looking out for/after Mikey. Brendon doesn't see any difference because there isn't one; he's still the same kid, there's just a name put to what makes him him. It's good to know that you liked the whole family analogy thing, I had quite a bit of fun thinking that one up! Mikey most certainly is in the right care here.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a kind and detailed review! :D