This... was.... AMAZING!!
I feel kinda mad at Pete because he should know better than to do something like kiss Mikey. He knows that Mikey's hurting and is extremely vulnerable, yet he still kissed him after hearing that he's dating Frank. Of course he apologized, but it still feels like he's kinda taking advantage a little bit. It really came across how confused Mikey is, how guilty too, all because of the kiss and the fact that he thinks he might love Pete back. Of course he's going to feel guilty and, given his current situation, this is bound to have a greater effect on the entire story.
Great job and I look forward to more, even if I have to wait for it! :D
Author's response
Thank you! Hearing that just made my day! Pete shouldnt have kissed Mikey knowing about him and Frank. I'm glad you see this point and about how it seems like he's taking advantage of Mikey. He may not have meant it to be as harsh as it came across from Mikeys point of view. Mikey is hurt and Pete just wants to show him that since Frank may not love him , it doesn't mean that no one will love him. He also just wanted to show that he especially loves him. So I hope this came across. I'm very happy that you see how guilty Mikey is feeling even though he can't help it. This was a point I wasn't too sure if it was noticeable. Thank you for reading and leaving such nice reviews each time! :)