Yes, yes, this is awesome. Really good writing, I like your style a lot. Casual, but then it suddenly slips into maturity. Classy. Liking the insight we get into Gerard's character at the beggining, that was bootiful, and I like the way you foreshadow without giving away too much.
Wow, this story looks like it's going to be wise and philosophical but fluffy and cute at the same time. Tis a well good mix. Can't wait to read on! ;)
SF
Author's response
Ooooh my writing has never been described as classy before oooh
Thank you so much this review is so lovely :3