Yeah I agree with xx_eddi_xx, I have seen something very similar to this... not saying that you stole it, because you don't seem like the person to!!
ANYWAY, this was funny and well written. Just a little short, if I had to give you an improvement I'd say expand your ideas a bit, maybe some more stuff about what Mikey was thinking?? idk.
Well done, I liked this :)
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I actually have never seen another like this... If you see it again, could you do me a favour and like post a link or something? I want to see how similar it is, idk, just curious... Thanks for the review... Um, yeah I kinda lost my cool at the other guy because I felt kinda like I was being accused... just the way it was worded... I'm not usually such a B-word...