Woah. That was… how do I respond to that? Seriously, how does one pick apart anything about that chapter and try to give a name to it. How does one look at something like that objectively and discuss merits or faults of the writing or plot? I can't. Not even a bit. I feel bad because I can usually pick up at least two points that really stood out in particular, but everything stood out. I can't decide which of my favorite parts was the best. I love that Ocean sucks rocks, because I, frankly, dislike women in fanfictions. I hope she d