Hey! So I just love this story, it's awesome and you're just an amazing writer (so much better then me)! I think what I like the most is Frankie's part in all of this; how he is starting to get those confused feelings (like when he has his fingers in Gee's hair). So I just wanted to let you know how awesome you are doing with this.
Also, I know how it feels to have all those stressful things, I have quite a few things going on as well so I understand how it affects what you write. Just take your time! No pressure (oh, I hope that did'nt just add pressure D: ).
Author's response
Thank you!! This made me smile! Thank you for understanding and nope that didn't add pressure ;) I'll have to check out some of your stuff! :) X