Review for Screw Pizza

Screw Pizza

(#) ThanksChemVenom 2012-06-08 10:07:37 AM

Grammar needs work, a lot more detail is needed, and it was totally out of place with the "they knew not when" thing, and the characters' dialogue was really bad.

And yep, I read it. Which is why I'm reviewing.

Author's response

I never accused you of not reading it. Thanks for the criticism.

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