Ok. Real review time:
I LOVE this story. Great plot and you have a real knack for making readers feel what the characters are feeling. Suggestion: sometimes you have a few grammar or spelling mistakes and occasionally some things are a little confusing. I've had this problem too, and what helps me is to read over it a bunch before posting. Or even get someone else to read it and give edits (not on the story, because that's great, just on the other stuff)
But it really is wonderful and I can't wait for an update. Keep writing!
hearts,
Corri
(p.s. if you need a editor, my services are def up for grabs)
Author's response
Yees real review. I love it. Thank you for the compliments and the helpful words. I know I must be making some mistakes but I'm Swedish so sometimes I don't see it or maybe don't know it's a mistake. I will get better at reading through the chapters though for sure. Thank you for the tips. Love it.
Hmmm I would actually really love using you as an editor if you'd be ok with that. Just letting me know when things are confusing or rushed and that stuff. I would very much need and want that. Maybe I can email you next time I finish a chapter before posting and get some help =) xoxo