Review for Trying To Escape The Inevitable

Trying To Escape The Inevitable

(#) Coffeeaddict98 2012-06-10

Awesome as always xD CatsCanFlyy does have a point though, your writing has a lot of power but that power can sometimes be lost in description(same thing happened in Lord of the Flies by William Golding). However I must applaud you for this chapter because your description was more concise and made your writing even better than usual. I love this story, the plot and the characters are so great! I'm as addicted to your stories as I am to coffee and that cliff-hanger is going to give me withdrawal symptoms, update when you can x