Review for Spring Fever
(#) Dustbunny3 2006-10-30 02:31:00 PM
The writing was great, not over-or-under-done. It was a very amusing read.
I love the Iruka portrayal, and Kakashi's utter shock at discovering the real Iruka. The only thing that came close to bugging me, and it was forgotten easily enough in my amusement over the story, was that Kakashi was late but because of Iruka instead of Obito. Of course that's forgivable anyway since this was done before the end of the Rescue Sasuke mission.
I also really appreciate the way Team 7 is characterized here. Naruto isn't a total idiot, Sakura isn't a whiney, fangirlly b!tch and Sasuke isn't emo.
All in all, I just might love you
*sigh* Something I had to do in English class.Thought I'd let you guys look at it first.
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One married woman, one semi-single guy. What happens when sparks fly where they shouldn't.