Review for Give It Your Best Shot

Give It Your Best Shot

(#) odonata617 2012-06-13 07:25:20 PM

This is one of the best of this type of story I've ever seen. The characterizations. thus far, ring true. That said, it might be argued that James is a bit too accepting, but I don't think the story works otherwise so that will have to pass. But, engrossing. Can't wait for the next installment.

Author's response

Thanks for reviewing. As for James being accepting, as the story continues you'll come to understand more about James and Lily's and how their son's 'illness', for lack of better term, have affect them. I've just update and you begin to see some of that in the new chapter.

Anyways, thank you for the compliment and I'm glad you like it. Oh, and thank you very much for your review.

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