Review for Forbidden Desires
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-06-14 03:24:59 PM
Just when I think the argument between Ryan and Kassidy is resolved, they start another one. And so on and so on. XD Somebody just lock 'em in a room and not let 'em out until they've made up (or out)!
You know what? As I've been reading this, unless there is any mention that, "oh, she's my sister," or "he's my brother," I actually forget that this is incest. O.o Dunno how that works!
This is working so far, and I'm so interested to see how you keep it going. And if that wasnt a painfully obvious way of telling you to update ASAP, then this is: UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!! XD
Haha, that's a pretty darn good idea!
I really wanted it to be that way because it also makes writing it seem a lot less wrong, you know? Incest disgusts me but unfortunately I can't seem to find a set reason as to why, that I can't rebuke in my mind. I hate arguing with myself about shit like that though.
I'm going to try to update tonight! I'm so sorry about how long I take lol. I hate not being able to sit down and write this out more often but I appreciate your reviews and that you're keeping up with the story. :D So thank you!
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