Review for CyberTech: War of the Worlds

CyberTech: War of the Worlds

(#) PzkwVIb 2012-06-17 09:35:52 PM

Good start, but you need a beta. Thereare a fair number of spelling and usage errors.

One grammar note: If Letters is the person's last name there should be no apostrophe, unless it is for possessive case and then it should be Letters'. It the name is Letter then loose the apostrophe and "s" unless it is being used as a possesive.

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