Aggh, this was so sad! D; I felt terrible for Ash, but the ending was so sweet and moving :'D I really felt part of the story, and felt very strongly what the characters were feeling. Usually, I wouldn't like so many shifts in point of view, but it actually really worked with this in my opinion, so well done. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to read and review this, but fuck, it was worth the wait! Thanks so much for posting such a heart-tugging piece of writing, I enjoyed reading it, although it did make me feel a little like crying!
Keep on writing, honey!
Lucy X_O
Author's response
Oh my goodness.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
It made you feel like crying? That wasn't the aim but fuck, that's pretty good. I liked writing it.
Once again, thank you so much for reviewing this!!
Working on a second Music and Words now!! :D
-Ash xxx