(#) BJH 2012-06-21
Wow, things just went from an amusing premise to really interesting. Very well written and plotted out. James is now forced to turn against Lily in order to help his son.
Really, really well done. Professional caliber work.
BJH
Author's response
Why thank you. I've always found the dynamic between Harry, James, and Lily in these sorts of stories lacking in one form or another. I thought a bit of spice was due.
Thanks for reviewing the chapter!