Bow-down-worthy chapter again! Things I would like to praise beyond my breath:
1) a) Your ability to render the incidents in a way that make them totally plausible and true to life. Your characters are multi-layered, make sense and are realisticly motivated. Heck, they have more personality than some of the people I hang out with (including me).
1) b) I especially marvel at Pete´s flash-back closet scene.
2) Making Patrick so perfect.
3) working in a Billy Joel song
I can´t say it enough: You´re a great writer, both on stylistic and plot levels. :)
Author's response
Thanks! This chapter took me a long time to get out, so I hope it was worth the wait. Also, I'm glad you appreciate the Billy Joel. I couldn't help myself. And Patick is just so perfect...I had to make him that way.