Review for First Of The Gang To Die

First Of The Gang To Die

(#) AlteredStateOfMind 2012-06-22

I'm re-reading this story for the second time 'cause it's just so freaking amazing, but I noticed something the last time I read it and it's kinda bugging me.


"You're mine now-if someone offers to kiss your knuckles, please say no." He paused and regarded the twenty two year old. "I am of Catholic faith, as you may have guessed, and I believe in abstaining from sexual intercourse before marriage. James...may not have agreed with me."

Frank nodded, a tad ashamed. He imagined what making love with this person would be like; he blushed bright pink and shook the thought from his head.

"No," he whispered. "He took me a long time ago."

Gerard nodded. "I see." He sucked at Frank's neck lovingly. "No matter. You'll be mine when we get married."


Okay, so, Frank's saying in that bit that he's not a virgin, right? I don't know if I'm missreading those lines or what, but in later chapters Frank says he is a virgin (apart from oral sex and whatnot) and that Gerard is the first person he properly slept with. Was that an error? Someone clarrify, please :s

Author's response

Um, I'm really sorry, I don't write the story, I just upload it. Maybe it was an error (?) Maybe he lied? Idk, I'm really sorry.


Jane

Um, I found this in Lorna's tumblr when talking about FOTG:

'I kinda made Frank lie in the beginning because he was shy & shiz....he wanted to be good for Gerard or something and then in the middle he's like oh yeah btw I've done the nasty and stuff...dunno my mind works weird'

Maybe that's an okayish explaination? Sorry again, I must sound like an arse.