Review for Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-06-23 12:17:03 AM
Holy crap... I thought that you got her reaction to Brendon telling her that he liked her spot on. It's what I would have done, probably. Then when she gets home and finds out that her mum let him in...! I would have absolutely flipped. I'm still so interested to see how everything goes between her and Ryan now, and ugh! I just wanna find out what happens next!
Such a good update and I can't wait for the next one! :D
Aw, well thank you! I try to make it as realistic as possible, you know? :D
Thank you so much!
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