Omg,I cannot understand why I didn't review this before. I've been reading it, but for some reason not reviewing. Well, I'll make up for it with some big mutter futtering review.
I really liked the idea of this story, It wasn't like many others i've seen so it interested me. It's also different to see a short multi-chapter story because most -[cough cough Evie]- are really long. Not that that's a bad thing, its just a nice change to see a short one.
I also loved the fact that Pete plays the shy one in this one. It's not very often you get to see that.
I'm hoping to see a sequal soon, and hoping to see what happens in the relationship. =]
--Izzyyy xx
Author's response
Omg, thank you for the super, uber long review! If you can't already tell, I like to shake things up a bit with my writing. Thanks again!!!