Review for A long journey's end
Anyway, Gladis Scott is a likeable and strong willed protagonist, I am very interested in how she responds to returning to a world she probably doesn't think of as home. There are a few spelling mistakes here and there but nothing substantial. Good luck with your future chapters.
Thank you for your review and I'm trying to get the next chapter finished soon, can't garantee anything though.
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