Review for Chronique of Rebirth

Chronique of Rebirth

(#) Redsliver 2006-11-01 06:40:32 AM

very well done, I like the confusion of the experimentee. I like his perplexed reaction to his own hand, however he recognised man from woman and young from old, it seemed odd that he hadn't recognised a hand, unless I misinterpreted the scenario and he simply didn't recognise it as his own hand.

I only noticed one spelling mistake, planed where you meant planned.

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