Review for Triwizard Redux

Triwizard Redux

(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-11-01 08:55:34 AM

I suppose they could still feed her to Neville's toad in the future. Nice to see Luna having other friends.

One typo "her shies had been a bit tight" Might as well change that to "shoes" before ficalley kicks it back to you.

Good chapter. Thanks for writing it.

Tom A.

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