I love what you have written so far. It started off slow with a seemingly typical girl and perfectly moved into an Evey and Collin thing. I like how he tries to give her all these warnings and praises her when she does give her friend a text letting her know where she's going. I would normaly say i cant wait for the next chapter to come out. But I'll try my best and be patient for you to write the next one if you do.