this was nice... nothign to special... but like and comfortable. I really hope you can make something out of this. not a hugely complex story with Voldemort taking over the world and many people dieing. but just something flowing. where their relationship grows. harry continues to train, now with renewed hope and desire. He finally kills Voldy in a 'fair' duel. nothign overly special just the desire to win and live.
anyway, i hope to see a story. congrats.